Saturday, May 21, 2011

The Young Hero

The young Hero was foolish
to act with such relish
in his own power.

He did not stop to think
of mercy because his mind
was set on justice.

It was the old Villain,
in his death, who taught
him his foolish ways.

He whispered to the Hero
as he died: I would
have granted you mercy.

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This poem was written in response to a prompt from Three Word Wednesday: foolish, mercy, relish.

4 comments:

  1. Richard, the ending of this poem is soooo poignant, sad. Too many 'young heroes' die.

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  2. Mary, thank you. Heroism is a tricky topic.

    Richard

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  3. Richard- Wonderful piece... great use of the words. I agree with Mary... very moving!

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  4. Laurie, thanks. It can be hard finding a common connection for those three words.

    Richard

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