he comes home late
and all he can do is complain
about the damp laundry
she thinks
but the clothes are clean
can't you see that
she holds her anger in
and he is incensed
she wants to avoid conflict
and he wants to fight
he is tired
and feels trapped
in her domesticity
she is tired
of his errant ways
his car the symbol of that
and the skid marks
he leaves on her soul
she's not sure
how much more
she can endure
/ / /
This poem was written using the theme of endure from One Single Impression incorporating damp, incensed, and skid from Three Word Wednesday. It is also a response to the cocktail of words prompt from We Write Poems.
I also offer it as my acceptance of the Perfect Poet Award for week 46 from Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe. I nominate Henry Clemmons, who blogs at The UnderSide of Green.
Showing posts with label Three Word Wednesday. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Three Word Wednesday. Show all posts
Saturday, June 18, 2011
Wednesday, June 15, 2011
Priorities
it's difficult sometimes
to know if what I do
is aligned with my priorities
life is erratic
like it's charting a course for me
that doesn't seem guided
by fate or design
I look for omens
signs to show me
that I'm doing the right things
even the occasional bad omen would be okay
something to fight against
an obstacle giving me
a short-term goal to focus on
something to measure myself by
but the fact is I don't believe in omens
signs from above or below
what's here and now
in the middle matters
teaching young people
writing poems
making my small portion
of this erratic life
brighter and more beautiful
at least I think so
that's the question I started with
isn't it?
but then I look
at my boys
and see what is reflected
in their luminous eyes
and everything seems
true and good
what I know
and what I do
the things that are me
appear congruent
and I wonder
why I question myself at all
I should take that
as a good omen
/ / /
This poem was written for the cocktail of words prompt at We Write Poems. I used the priorities prompt from Poetic Asides and erratic, luminous, and omen from Three Word Wednesday.
A special "Thank you" to the great people at We Write Poems for using my prompt idea this past week. I enjoy writing to their prompts and being a part of their community. I am looking forward to seeing what others have written.
to know if what I do
is aligned with my priorities
life is erratic
like it's charting a course for me
that doesn't seem guided
by fate or design
I look for omens
signs to show me
that I'm doing the right things
even the occasional bad omen would be okay
something to fight against
an obstacle giving me
a short-term goal to focus on
something to measure myself by
but the fact is I don't believe in omens
signs from above or below
what's here and now
in the middle matters
teaching young people
writing poems
making my small portion
of this erratic life
brighter and more beautiful
at least I think so
that's the question I started with
isn't it?
but then I look
at my boys
and see what is reflected
in their luminous eyes
and everything seems
true and good
what I know
and what I do
the things that are me
appear congruent
and I wonder
why I question myself at all
I should take that
as a good omen
/ / /
This poem was written for the cocktail of words prompt at We Write Poems. I used the priorities prompt from Poetic Asides and erratic, luminous, and omen from Three Word Wednesday.
A special "Thank you" to the great people at We Write Poems for using my prompt idea this past week. I enjoy writing to their prompts and being a part of their community. I am looking forward to seeing what others have written.
Labels:
poetic,
Poetic Asides,
Three Word Wednesday,
We Write Poems
Saturday, May 21, 2011
The Young Hero
The young Hero was foolish
to act with such relish
in his own power.
He did not stop to think
of mercy because his mind
was set on justice.
It was the old Villain,
in his death, who taught
him his foolish ways.
He whispered to the Hero
as he died: I would
have granted you mercy.
/ / /
This poem was written in response to a prompt from Three Word Wednesday: foolish, mercy, relish.
to act with such relish
in his own power.
He did not stop to think
of mercy because his mind
was set on justice.
It was the old Villain,
in his death, who taught
him his foolish ways.
He whispered to the Hero
as he died: I would
have granted you mercy.
/ / /
This poem was written in response to a prompt from Three Word Wednesday: foolish, mercy, relish.
Labels:
poetic,
Three Word Wednesday
Thursday, May 19, 2011
Making Vegan Burgers
Getting the water just the right
temperature for the cool
dorsum and the warmer palm,
then the liquid soap,
antibacterial or not, to cleanse.
Feeling calmer now, measuring
out the ingredients into the curve
of the bowl, no anticipation,
just action, kneading the gluten
with clean hands and a clear mind.
Forming the burger patties,
ready for the spring grill,
I notice that my anger
has melted away, and I have made
food for my family with love.
/ / /
This poem was written in response to a prompt from Three Word Wednesday: cleanse, knead, and melt.
This is the third of four poems I wrote over the last week for Three Word Wednesday. Number four will be along tomorrow, and then I'll be taking a short break. My school year ends on Friday, May 27. I have to finish grading papers and I haven't even started on report cards yet. Once my summer vacation starts, I will be much more active here, and I promise to get caught up reading and commenting on your poems.
Today also happens to be my younger son's seventh birthday. (Happy birthday, Aidan!) He likes my vegan burgers, and he likes helping me in the kitchen to make them.
temperature for the cool
dorsum and the warmer palm,
then the liquid soap,
antibacterial or not, to cleanse.
Feeling calmer now, measuring
out the ingredients into the curve
of the bowl, no anticipation,
just action, kneading the gluten
with clean hands and a clear mind.
Forming the burger patties,
ready for the spring grill,
I notice that my anger
has melted away, and I have made
food for my family with love.
/ / /
This poem was written in response to a prompt from Three Word Wednesday: cleanse, knead, and melt.
This is the third of four poems I wrote over the last week for Three Word Wednesday. Number four will be along tomorrow, and then I'll be taking a short break. My school year ends on Friday, May 27. I have to finish grading papers and I haven't even started on report cards yet. Once my summer vacation starts, I will be much more active here, and I promise to get caught up reading and commenting on your poems.
Today also happens to be my younger son's seventh birthday. (Happy birthday, Aidan!) He likes my vegan burgers, and he likes helping me in the kitchen to make them.
Labels:
poetic,
Three Word Wednesday
Wednesday, May 18, 2011
Tonic Town
i wanted to surrender
to love of grace
but she made it so hard
she would thin her gin
her evening meal
every day except sunday
she didn't eat at all
on sundays
which is how
she stayed so thin
god, she was beautiful
empty calories
for an empty heart
that i wanted to fill
my better self wanted
to fill it with love
my baser self just wanted
to fill it
with a need for me
and she smelled so fine
that i was rarely thin
when i was near her
i would say her scent
was intoxicating
but that would give
the wrong impression
i joked that she had
surrendered to grace
the baser grace
that was a mirror of me
but it wasn't funny
a jigger of this
a jigger of that
then the jitters set in
i wanted to surrender
to grace
but i didn't
she had already
surrendered herself
to something greater
than me
i'm sorry, grace
that i couldn't save you
from your surrender
* * * * *
This poem was written in response to the Take the driver's seat! prompt at We Write Poems:
First consider what prompt would be an interesting and challenging prompt for you, including then what you think would be good for the group. Then 1) write a brief paragraph describing the poem prompt itself, and 2) go ahead and write your own poem to that prompt.
For my poem, I used surrender as the theme from Sunday Scribblings, and grace, thin, and jitter from Three Word Wednesday.
So, here's my prompt:
One, select a prompt from a site like Poetic Asides, Writer's Island, Sunday Scribblings, or One Single Impression. This will be the topic or theme of your poem. Two, select some words from a site like Three Word Wednesday or a wordling whirl of Sundays. Now, consider your theme/topic and your words. See if those words will help you explore or expand on your theme, or see if your topic opens up, leading down unexpected avenues, as you play with those words. Trust your poetic intuition and imagination. You could choose prompts that you haven't previously responded to, or revisit ones you've already done, or find a prompt that previously stumped you, and see if this take on it will help you get a poem written.
to love of grace
but she made it so hard
she would thin her gin
her evening meal
every day except sunday
she didn't eat at all
on sundays
which is how
she stayed so thin
god, she was beautiful
empty calories
for an empty heart
that i wanted to fill
my better self wanted
to fill it with love
my baser self just wanted
to fill it
with a need for me
and she smelled so fine
that i was rarely thin
when i was near her
i would say her scent
was intoxicating
but that would give
the wrong impression
i joked that she had
surrendered to grace
the baser grace
that was a mirror of me
but it wasn't funny
a jigger of this
a jigger of that
then the jitters set in
i wanted to surrender
to grace
but i didn't
she had already
surrendered herself
to something greater
than me
i'm sorry, grace
that i couldn't save you
from your surrender
* * * * *
This poem was written in response to the Take the driver's seat! prompt at We Write Poems:
First consider what prompt would be an interesting and challenging prompt for you, including then what you think would be good for the group. Then 1) write a brief paragraph describing the poem prompt itself, and 2) go ahead and write your own poem to that prompt.
For my poem, I used surrender as the theme from Sunday Scribblings, and grace, thin, and jitter from Three Word Wednesday.
So, here's my prompt:
One, select a prompt from a site like Poetic Asides, Writer's Island, Sunday Scribblings, or One Single Impression. This will be the topic or theme of your poem. Two, select some words from a site like Three Word Wednesday or a wordling whirl of Sundays. Now, consider your theme/topic and your words. See if those words will help you explore or expand on your theme, or see if your topic opens up, leading down unexpected avenues, as you play with those words. Trust your poetic intuition and imagination. You could choose prompts that you haven't previously responded to, or revisit ones you've already done, or find a prompt that previously stumped you, and see if this take on it will help you get a poem written.
Tuesday, May 17, 2011
Public School Teachers
We brandish respect
and knowledge
for we are mighty inside.
We forbid no one.
All are welcome
to enter and learn.
We manage this daily
with little compensation
and little complaint.
I challenge you to do the same.
* * * * *
This poem was written in response to a prompt from Three Word Wednesday: brandish, forbid, and manage.
Paula suggested that this poem might work for the Poetic Asides prompt to write a telling it like it is poem. I agree. Thanks, Paula.
and knowledge
for we are mighty inside.
We forbid no one.
All are welcome
to enter and learn.
We manage this daily
with little compensation
and little complaint.
I challenge you to do the same.
* * * * *
This poem was written in response to a prompt from Three Word Wednesday: brandish, forbid, and manage.
Paula suggested that this poem might work for the Poetic Asides prompt to write a telling it like it is poem. I agree. Thanks, Paula.
Labels:
Poetic Asides,
Three Word Wednesday
Saturday, April 16, 2011
Lost Soul
he fabricates the illusion
that he is in control
building it up with an adamant
will devoid of imagination
what he cannot see in himself
is clearly evident to me
and what is tragic is that
it is not peculiar but commonplace
* * * * *
This poem was written in response to two prompts at Three Word Wednesday, one using adamant, fabricate, and peculiar, and one using evident, illusion, and tragic.
that he is in control
building it up with an adamant
will devoid of imagination
what he cannot see in himself
is clearly evident to me
and what is tragic is that
it is not peculiar but commonplace
* * * * *
This poem was written in response to two prompts at Three Word Wednesday, one using adamant, fabricate, and peculiar, and one using evident, illusion, and tragic.
Labels:
poetic,
Three Word Wednesday
Sunday, April 03, 2011
Lune
With their riches,
lobbyists are loud and persuasive.
A democratic republic?
* * * * *
This poem was written in response to a prompt at Three Word Wednesday using the words: loud, persuasive, and riches.
The form I have used is a variant of the Lune, which I learned about at Poetic Asides.
lobbyists are loud and persuasive.
A democratic republic?
* * * * *
This poem was written in response to a prompt at Three Word Wednesday using the words: loud, persuasive, and riches.
The form I have used is a variant of the Lune, which I learned about at Poetic Asides.
Labels:
poetic,
Poetic Asides,
Three Word Wednesday
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