The was giving A and An a hard time
No one can be the greatest without me
Nobody says a greatest
or an awesomest
No, that's true, said A
while An rolled her eyes
You may be the superlative
but we're positive and comparative
We're helpful in ways
you could never be
Besides, how often does anyone
reach the peak and actually need you
The was slightly crestfallen
but that did not slow him down
It's not just that, he said
pointing at the book and the apple
True, said An, but there are many
books and apples, reaching out
for A's hand - We work together
while you're always alone
Yes, said A, you're so definite,
boxing yourself in, so limited
For everything you can do
we can do too more openly
An said, pointing at a book
and an apple sitting on a table
But, said The, you're always nearly
You're never quite exactly
A started to argue back
but An put her finger on his lips
There's no point, she said
It's just his nature
And they strolled off together
an arm around a waist
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This poem was written in response to two prompts. The first is Unlimited at Writer's Island and the second is Nearly (#260) at Sunday Scribblings.
So cleaver and entertaining and so true. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteSo whimsical. I love this!
ReplyDeleteZouxzoux and Kimiko, thank you for reading my poem and leaving comments. I'm glad you liked it. I'm glad you thought it was clever and whimsical. (That's what I was going for).
ReplyDeleteClever, and entertaining too.
ReplyDeleteAC, thank you for stopping by. I'm glad you found it entertaining.
ReplyDeleteA great poem
ReplyDeleteAN entertaining read
THE most enjoyable I've read today...
not just nearly, but DEFINITIVELY so.
:)
~Paula
Paula, thank you, thank you. Your kind and clever words brightened my day. Thanks for stopping by. :)
ReplyDeleteso beautiful i feel my heart soften as i arrive to "an arm around a waist"
ReplyDeletedefinitely A favorite!
littlekhargosh, thank you. I'm proud of this poem, and I'm glad it's A favorite of yours.
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