The Gift
birds have flight
fish breathe underwater
plants make their own food
nature has bestowed
the gift on all
but in each
it takes a different form
we have our minds
and everything that stems
from that gift
but now I have
to wonder if
we've used ours well
we've invented devices
so that we can fly
and breathe underwater
we've even gone farther
than all other living things
into orbit and beyond
but what of compassion?
we have not done things
with, but for
we copied the birds
we imitated the fish
and the plants?
we need them
but we don't want
to be like them
we bent them
to our will
to serve our needs
lower than pets
stuck in pots
arrayed in fields
concentration camps
that don't need fences
to keep the prisoners
cultivation now to me
seems like subjugation
domination not dominion
you might say
plants don't feel
we're not doing them harm
you might be right
maybe the plants
are happy to serve us
you might be wrong
maybe the plants scream
at us but we cannot hear
there are waves
we cannot see or hear
out gift doesn't extend that far
maybe it's foolish
to think that plants can feel --
personification
see, even I do it
thinking I can impose
my perspective on others
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This poem was written in response to The Gift prompt at Writer's Island.
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The Key
my house key looks a lot
like my classroom key
I get them mixed up
all the time
what does that say
about me
and my priorities?
their shape is similar
but they are noticeably
different in size
so why don't I notice?
when the key doesn't fit
I know it's the wrong one
it's tactile, not visual
(I can't even talk
about my car key
that symbol of shame
and complicity
because the closest
gas station to my house
is Arco, a BP brand)
what hangs me up though
is that definite article
I want to know
what the key to life is
is it love? is that
the key? or is it
fidelity to that love?
or is it just silly
of me to play
grammar games with the phrase?
as if that were cleverness
I've already talked
of different keys, so one
is obviously not the answer
my work, my home,
my car which transports me
between the two, and my wife
who holds the key to my heart
the physical keys
and the metaphorical
are all splayed about me
so how do I choose?
or are all my choice?
and thus all are
ways to unlock me
now I understand, I think,
that the key is not
the answer, but the question
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This poem was written in response to The Key prompt at Writer's Island.
Enjoyed both of these.
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ReplyDeleteI loved reading both of these! Thanks for sharing!
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p.s. Thanks for commenting on my blog! It's greatly appreciated!
I didn't contribute to the gift topic this week but somehow, this rather than the other, really rang my bell. Personification of plants and animals is very real to me. I often fail at gardening and frequently blame it on my state of mind. My garden is confusion and neglect, would be about right. Life changes and gifts gain and lose value. Thus the good news is, a benign fairy is resurrecting my garden and soon it will be a gift to all.
ReplyDeleteWeasel, thanks for reading my poems. And right back at you, thanks for commenting. I appreciate it as well.
ReplyDeleteAnnie, thanks for your comments. "Life changes and gifts gain and lose value" - sounds like a line from a poem to me. I wish you luck with your garden.
Mr. Walker, the message in your first poem is so very true. We are all given gifts, but have we used ours well? Or have we just used nature for our own (selfish?) purposes?
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your second poem too, and I was with you throughout it all...and you are so right on when you say that the key is not the answer by the question!
(I came back to visit your blog a second time to read MORE after reading your wordle poem for Big Tent this week.) I like your style!
http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/
Mary, thank you so much for coming back to read even more of my poems. That, in itself, is high praise - and I accept it gratefully. I'm truly enjoying writing poems and reading what others, like you, are writing. It makes me happy to be part of this poetry community online.
ReplyDeleteMr. Walker, it makes me happy too to be part of this poetry community online. It is a wonderful gift@
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