tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24017814.post1718443108405708159..comments2023-08-16T08:30:19.873-07:00Comments on Sadly Waiting for Recess: "it's hard to pull my gaze away"Mr. Walkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16125024096735394592noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24017814.post-59182412034905219742011-03-28T08:24:21.641-07:002011-03-28T08:24:21.641-07:00Gautami, thank you. I'm gratified that so many...Gautami, thank you. I'm gratified that so many people thought that last stanza ended the poem well.Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24017814.post-89049043295151975342011-03-24T07:40:05.928-07:002011-03-24T07:40:05.928-07:00That last stanza is very good...
face on the wall...That last stanza is very good...<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/03/face-on-walll.html" rel="nofollow">face on the wall</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24017814.post-33969534103490476482011-03-23T16:25:05.473-07:002011-03-23T16:25:05.473-07:00Pamela, Brenda, Nicole, and Elizabeth, thank you a...Pamela, Brenda, Nicole, and Elizabeth, thank you all for reading my poem and your kind words. I'm glad you felt this poem ended so successfully.<br /><br />And Nicole, thanks for catching the time clue; I was hoping people would.Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24017814.post-26658031024735763002011-03-23T15:01:12.032-07:002011-03-23T15:01:12.032-07:00I can only echo all those before me, the last stan...I can only echo all those before me, the last stanza is nicely done,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24017814.post-91955171980149813632011-03-23T12:11:07.965-07:002011-03-23T12:11:07.965-07:00Et moi aussi. I love the last stanza, but I love t...Et moi aussi. I love the last stanza, but I love the time clue you give in the second. Nicely done.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24017814.post-56831633457178111262011-03-23T11:30:55.459-07:002011-03-23T11:30:55.459-07:00Hi Mr. Walker,
Pamela beat me to it. I love the l...Hi Mr. Walker,<br />Pamela beat me to it. I love the last stanza as well. You definitely rose to the prompt. Well done!<br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24017814.post-84485368702763702682011-03-23T11:15:02.911-07:002011-03-23T11:15:02.911-07:00Mr. Walker, I adore that last stanza.
Stated nicel...Mr. Walker, I adore that last stanza.<br />Stated nicely.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com